The highlights and the underlines help to see where my strengths of my points are and where i sort of fall off topic. With this review, i could refocus my essay easier on points that i know are on topic. Also, my next draft will eliminate the weaker sentences and points and there will be greater support for the points that were stressed by the highlight. The essay is easier to break up and re edit because i now know the sections and parts that i need to reconstruct without taking out the better parts.