Today's workshop provided a lot of insight on my essay for me. For instance, i found out how i should focus my essay on solely how i as a person grew up. We worked on the organization of my essay, and how i should place each topic in order. The workshop benefited on how i should also begin and conclude the essay in a strong connected way. The shows i picked to describe me in my draft were solid, but my group helped how i would relate to them even more.