Some critical changes i am going to make in my paper are to reduce the number of shows i talk about for each era; in order to focus on one show deeply. For my childhood shows i must go in more depth on my analysis, rather than just writing about how i learned about friendship and responsibility. I will have show that the world seemed like a friendly place and that it was a lovable atmosphere. Also for my present day era, i would have to make sure that i stress the world and reality is hitting me hardest at this time. Nowadays its not how i view the world or what i think about it, moreover im living it and shit is real now. These changes will help the reader see how the things that i learned from the show created me outlook on the world and people around me.