1. The photograph is of a little girl ready to throw a tantrum.She is standing in the middle of a hallway with an upset look and anger.

2. The photograph is composed to focus the attention on the little girl down the hall because she is the only object in the image. Her dress draws my attention because it looks like one youd put on a doll, which shows that she is still a little girl.

3. The photograph is about a short story that could be dragged out. She wants something, and she wont stop until she gets it, whether it be with her bad attitude or not.

4. My position as a son influences this photo because ive been at that age where i would hassle my parents with temper tantrums until i got the toy that i wanted. I can relate to the little girl because i too would have had that look at my parents if they wouldnt get me what i wanted.

The introduction of my paper leads in with a story of my thesis that would ease readers into the topic and it leaves readers wondering how these shows really did change me. My conclusion does a good job summing up my main points of the essay and stressing the key qualities of me that have changed in effect from the shows i discussed in the essay. I tried to paint a picture of the kid I've grown up to be also in the conclusion for readers to understand how I've become a different person.The conclusion does answer the "so what" question because it teaches people to be grateful over the shows they watch as kids and and that all this learned from these shows serve a purpose in life.

Today's peer review really gave me confidence in my essay, and i feel like it is close to the final draft. I will change the grammar errors i made but i feel like the general idea i has is the one i will stick with. The review made me aware of the strengths of my essay and also the weakness'. I plan to work on my conclusion more but other than that i am happy with the end draft of this review.

Some critical changes i am going to make in my paper are to reduce the number of shows i talk about for each era; in order to focus on one show deeply. For my childhood shows i must go in more depth on my analysis, rather than just writing about how i learned about friendship and responsibility. I will have show that the world seemed like a friendly place and that it was a lovable atmosphere. Also for my present day era, i would have to make sure that i stress the world and reality is hitting me hardest at this time. Nowadays its not how i view the world or what i think about it, moreover im living it and shit is real now. These changes will help the reader see how the things that i learned from the show created me outlook on the world and people around me.

Today's workshop provided a lot of insight on my essay for me. For instance, i found out how i should focus my essay on solely how i as a person grew up. We worked on the organization of my essay, and how i should place each topic in order. The workshop benefited on how i should also begin and conclude the essay in a strong connected way. The shows i picked to describe me in my draft were solid, but my group helped how i would relate to them even more.